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« on: September 02, 2010, 04:03:36 PM »

  I think this shot made good use of the circ. pol, because it brings up the detail and color of the
 underwater.  I also like the reflection of the tree branches that came up on upper right corner.
  What do you think, guys.    Freddy

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« Reply #1 on: September 02, 2010, 08:35:33 PM »

Freddy, it looks like you did exactly what you said. Nice composition. This might work as a selective color image if you feel like playing with the PP on it.
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« Reply #2 on: September 02, 2010, 09:51:19 PM »

That is excellent composition and very good use of the CP.
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« Reply #3 on: September 02, 2010, 11:15:54 PM »

  You made my day, guys.
  Here's a revision, Tim.   Freddy

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« Reply #4 on: September 02, 2010, 11:32:08 PM »

Those kinda look exactly the same? Am I missing something?
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« Reply #5 on: September 02, 2010, 11:44:12 PM »

I removed all the black spots from the lily plant leaves..   Freddy
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« Reply #6 on: September 02, 2010, 11:58:55 PM »

I did notice something different, but wasn't sure what it was. I do like it a little better.
At any rate, this is the best shot I've seen from you so far, Freddy. It's a keeper. I don't think I'd mess with it.
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« Reply #7 on: September 03, 2010, 12:16:53 AM »

I agree totally with Ron that this is one of your best shots Freddy. Well done. JIM
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« Reply #8 on: September 03, 2010, 12:31:50 AM »

Ok, I'm the wet blanket here. I wish...that you'd not cut off the left most edge of the central lilly pad. If there was the complete pad and just a smidgen space to the left it would have been better to my eye.
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« Reply #9 on: September 03, 2010, 01:43:07 AM »

  Thanks, Ron, Tim, Jimbo.  I promise I won't touch it any more.
     Gee , I just saw a shot from Adam of a swan via Sigma 70-300, on the other forum.  I definitely will buy that lens some day.      Freddy
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« Reply #10 on: September 03, 2010, 01:51:24 AM »

Freddy, just say no to LBA! Oops, too late.
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« Reply #11 on: September 03, 2010, 01:54:53 AM »

 Gosh whiskers, as my Grandma used to say, at that price how could you not buy it.  Freddy
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« Reply #12 on: September 03, 2010, 10:16:51 AM »

Very nice image Freddy - the second one is best   Cool

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« Reply #13 on: September 03, 2010, 05:42:30 PM »

  Thanks, Mike.   Freddy
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